It was Saturday night and Raven was getting ready to go to the club. Raven just turned 21 today, and her friend Krystal wanted to take her out for her birthday. They were going to this club called Fantasy. Krystal told Raven to be ready by 12, Raven looked at the clock and it said 10:30 she had plenty of time to get ready. Before she went in the shower her cell phone rang it was Dillon, Dillon was her bank, whatever she wanted he gave it to her no problem. She met Dillon a year ago on her way home from work. He tried to spit his game her way but he also had a ring on his finger. Raven told him she didn't pursue married men but he insisted on trying to be with her so she just gave him her number.

"Hello" said Raven answering the phone.

"Hey Rae happy birthday" said Dillon.

"Thanks Dillon"

"What's going on beautiful?"

"You talking to your wife?"

"Why you have to go there? I'm up the block and I want to give you a little something something for your birthday"

"Alright well I'm upstairs"

"Alright" said Dillon hanging up.

Raven to a real quick shower because she didn't want Dillon getting any ideas. She put on her white mini bubble halter dress. Let her hair down and put on her silver Prada stilettos. While she was applying make-up Dillon rang her bell. When she opened the door and he had roses and a Louis Vuitton purse in his hand. "Thanks Dillon" she said as she let him in. He sat on her couch and watched her get ready. "Open up the bag" he said. Raven opened up the bag to find 5 G's inside. "For me?" she said playing with his head. Dillon got up and gave her a hug, "Yea for you" he said as he let her go. "Well I'm up out of here Rae, got business". Raven walked him to the door and he gave her a kiss on the cheek. Just as he was leaving Krystal got off the elevator. When she got inside she immediately asked why Dillon was in her apartment. Raven showed her the Louis bag and the 5 G's that went with it and she shut up. "Girl you ready?" "Yea, Kris let's go". When they got to the club parking was a breeze. The club was banging, the music was right and so were the men. Raven and Krystal went to the V.I.P because Krystal's friend had set it up for them to go there. When they got in Krystal's friend, Jamal and his friend Trevor were sitting there waiting. "Ay yo J who's the chick with Krystal?" asked Trevor over the loud music. "That's Raven her bestfriend". Krystal gave Jamal a hug in a kiss. Raven gave him a hug and they sat down. "Krystal and Rae this right my homeboy Trev". Raven didn't even notice him sitting there. He must have been one of the finest men in the club, He had a nice milk chocolate complexion with the whitest teeth you've ever seen and from the bulge in his pants he got after looking Raven in her eyes she knew he was packing. Trevor asked her if she wanted to dance and she said "Yea". When he up he was about 6'1, he led Raven by the hand to the dance floor. She was whining all up on him to Vybz Kartel "Romping Shop". His dick was rock hard now and she felt it. He turned her around because he was beginning to get embarrassed. When they face to face they kissed, Trevor slid his tongue in her mouth and her panties got wet. He puller her closer to him and began to grab on her ass. When they got back to the V.I.P room Krystal and Jamal were gone and she got a text saying that she had went with Jamal to her place. Raven didn't have a car so Trevor drove her home she gave him her number and got out, he stayed to make sure she got in safe. When she got in front of her building Dillon was sitting on her front steps with a bottle of liquor in his hands. He grabbed Raven " Give me a kiss girl". His breathe was disgusting so Raven pushed him off of her. "I said give me a kiss bitch I spent my whole check on your shit and you can't give me no kiss." yelled Dillon."Dillon your drunk get the fuck off me". Trevor saw them arguing so he got out of his truck and went to approach Dillon. "Raven is there a problem" said Trevor grilling Dillon. "Nigga back up this ain't got shit to do with you" said Dillon who could hardly stand up. "You putting your hands on her got a whole lot to do with me". Dillon swung at Trevor and lost his balance and fell on the floor and passed out. "I don't want you to go upstairs with that nigga out here pasted out Raven, Can I take you to Krystal's house or something?" asked Trevor. "No it's alright I'm cool" "Well let me walk you upstairs" Raven and Trevor went upstairs and they were walking to her door. "I had a good time with you Raven" "I had a good time with you too Trevor". Raven unlocked her door and gave him a hug, which turned to a kiss. Trevor opened the door as he was kissing her and they went to the couch. She wet her panties again and his dick was hard. He picked her up and she led him to the bedroom. He put her on the bed and took off her shirt, and played with her breast. Raven was right Trevor's package was huge. He slid on a condom and penetrated her pussy as he entered her. "Trevor!" she screamed as he went in deeper. His strokes were long,powerful, and sincere. Raven came five times and the last he came with her. She took the condom off his dick and flushed it down the toilet and got back in the bed with him. She lied next to him and this was the beginning of a new relationship.

Hi Readers,

This is my first installment of this story. I've been reading and notice most authors don't finish there stories that is soo crazy because you be caught up in it. I'll try not to be like them but tell me what you think.

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B.Scott,

Great Story

2009-06-24 22:07:58

Bunny,

I liked...please DONT leave me hangin....LOL...waitin 4 more.

2009-06-25 07:23:45

lala,

great story..keep it coming

2009-06-29 12:19:49

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