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Aftershock part 1(introduction)

Introduction

A year ago, Sydney Manor was in love and having the time of her life. She had a great job, she had just been proposed to by the love of her life of 3 years. Things couldn't get better. She was on cloud nine. Even though her man didn't have a job at the time she still couldn't help the fact that she was in love with him, and since she made her own and had her own it wasn't that big of a deal because material things never really mattered to her. She had never been on a real date where she didn't have to pay the bill, but mind you this girl was in love so it didn't matter. She supported him and took care of him. He lived with her and didn't have to pay a dime of rent bills or anything. He drove her car. She was blinded by love. Michael on the other hand was the most selfish motha fucker you would ever meet. He used the shit out of Sydney and as long as she was giving it he was gonna take it. He didn't love her, he was still fucking with his first baby mama. Sydney was a well established young lady, she had a degree in accounting and landing a job at a very high paying accounting firm in Atlanta before she even graduated college. After Michael broke her heart she didn't think she would love again, but then came Sean who would quickly change that. I gave you a snippet to part 1 first but here is the entire part. If the story line intrests you by all means keep reading, if not, its simple, don't read it..

Part 1

"Sydney, you have a call on line one", her secretary stated over the intercom. Sydney knew this was Michael calling because he called the same time everyday. "This is Sydney, can I help you?" "What's good mama?" said Michael in to the phone. Sydney had just come from the doctor where she just found out she was 6 weeks pregnant, and she needed to find a way to tell him. "Hey baby, we need to talk." she said. "About what?" "Michael I'm 6 weeks pregnant" There was silence on the other end of the phone. "Hello?" said Sydney worried about what Michael would think. "Yeah I'm here. So what you gonna do about it yo?" Said Michael. This question knocked Sydney back a bit. "What do you mean what am I gonna do about it? I'm gonna keep it! What the hell Michael?" Michael knew that he didn't want anymore children, he already had 3 other babies that Sydney did not know about. All 3 born within the 3 years that they were together, all 3 by his main chick that Sydney didn't know about. "You know I'm not working Sydney I can't afford no baby" "Well, duh, Michael I am pretty well off I can take care of it until you get another job if that's all you're worried about". Sydney I don't want a damn baby alright?!?" Sydney couldn't understand where all of this was coming from, she thought that Michael loved her and wanted to be with her, if that was the case why didn't he want to have a child by her. She was confused and extremely pissed about this. "So you're saying that you want me to have an abortion? Are you fucking serious?!? " "Yeah that's what i'm saying, I don't want no more fucking babies" Michael said getting angry.. Oh shit, he thought, i just told.. before he could even finish his thought Sydney went off. "WHAT DA FUCK YOU MEAN BABIES?!? YOU TELLING ME YOU GOT CHILDREN I DON'T KNOW ABOUT?!? WHAT DA FUCK MICHAEL?!" Sydney baby calm down lemme explain." EXPLAIN WHAT YOU GOT FUCKING CHILDREN OUT THERE AND YOU DIDN'T EVEN BOTHER TO UTTER A FUCKING WORD TO ME, YOU STILL FUCKIN THE BITCH OR BITCHES TOO??!" Sydney was outraged, how could this sorry motha fucka pull some shit off on her like this? "No baby I'm not fucking her, it was all before you honestly.I would never do anything like that to you, you know that." Michael knew he was lying but he couldn't lose access to the bank, he couldn't lose Sydney. He was using her money to support his main chick and his 3 kids. Michael had to do some damage control so he tried to calm Sydney. "Baby calm down before you do something irrational. I know i shoulda told you but I didn't want to run you away, how would you have felt if I told you I had 3 kids from the jump?" Sydney was damn near about to explode at this point. Realizing that she was pregnant she tried to calm herself down. "Michael, you have 3 children? 3?! How are you going to be with me for 3 years and not say anything? What makes you think I would have run away if you told me that?" Michael knew he had her wrapped around his finger and was about to go in for the kill. "Baby you know I love you, I promise I won't lie to you again. We have our own child to raise now so lets live in the moment." Weak for this fool's every word she gave in. "Alright baby but we are still going to have to talk about it." said a now calming Sydney. Jackpot! Thought Michael. "Cool, aye baby. Lemme hold about 300 dollars.." as if hypnotized by this man, Sydney didn't hesitate and answered with a simple "Okay baby."

 

Sydney didn't know what to make of all of this, She loved Michael with all her heart and wondered if all he was saying was true. Were the 3 children before her? Why didn't he tell her? She was dumbfounded and was dangerously in love. She was feeling sick and decided to end her day early not calling Michael and telling him that she was coming home early, she wanted to suprise him. But she would be the one Suprised

 
Comments
MzKeepItReal,
okay.. Just for clarification, this is the beginning of the story. I posted a snippet just to test the waters, not im gonna lay down the story line. This is the introduction and the story leading up the present day. As I stated in my story if the story lines and the snippet grabbed your attention then by all means continue reading. If not, its simple, don't read it.. Feedback is welcome both good and bad criticisms.. I will use that to better the story! Thx!
2008-12-04 00:55:40
MzKeepItReal,
im sorry i meant *now i'm gonna lay down the story line*
2008-12-04 00:56:23
yea,
keep iy coming!!
2008-12-04 08:46:25
Ghost Writer,
Yayyy that was excellent girl! This is the first story I've read on here that is ALMOST grammatically perfect..punctuation on point and all! I'm supporting you!
2008-12-04 10:07:42
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Great fing story!
2008-12-07 02:24:48
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