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Aftershock (snippet)

She hadn't been on a real date before. Well a date where she wasn't stuck with the bill. Sydney was 24 and had missed out on alot because of her previous relationship. She met this man through a friend and was skeptical of the blind date at first, she decided against herself and went. She had just recently gotten out of a relationship with her son's father. She walked in on him in the bed with his ex. After that moment she thought that she would never love someone the same way she loved her fiance. But that would soon change. The night of her first date she felt like a school girl going out for the first time. She was anxious and excited at the same time.

Syndey was a gorgeous redbone. She was 5'5 130lbs.. Thick in all the right places. She didn't wear makeup because she didn't need it. She had gorgeous skin, succulent and soft lips, a beautiful smile, and hazel eyes. Even though it had been a minute since she had gone out she quickly jumped right back into the game. Sydney and Sean had been talking on the phone for a little over a month. At first she wasn't into him but she let her past go and started to really dig the guy. When Sean rolled up in his 2008 Jaguar she was like okay. Being from a stable family she wasn't really concerned with material things but the brotha did drive a nice car lol. This would be her first time meeting him in person. As she walked down the steps in her fitted Apple Bottom jeans and Top and Prada Knee boots she was looking right for her night out with Sean. When she first saw him she was almost out of breath. This brotha was fine! Oh the things she would do to him.. She thought. Her pussy throbbed with excitement..Something she had not felt in months.. He was chocolate, perfect smile that made her weak in the knees, a perfect haircut.. She did love a clean cut brotha. .. His swag was simple yet sexy. Ralph Lauren must be his best friend because this brotha loved some Polo from his head down to his feet.

He walked over and gave her a hug.. mmmm he smells good, she thought.. The way he smiled at her made her pussy wet. I better behave tonight, she thought. He walked over and opened the door for her.. hmmm, a gentleman? She thought as she got into the car. They went to eat at her favorite spot, and went to a movie. All during the dinner and the movie she was getting more aroused just thinking about what she would do to this nigga when she got him back home. She couldn't even focus on the movie, Saw V, which she has so desperately wanted to see. It had been a couple of months since she had some good dick and wanted to try his on for size.

On the way back home she couldn't take it anymore she had to taste this man. But she wasn't sure if it was too soon. Then she thought we have been on the phone for a couple months and you only get one life so she was just about to live it up. So she reached over and put her hand on his thigh.. No response. She started to move her hand up his thigh to find an already erect dick. mmm.. she thought.. he wasn't all the way hard but from what she felt he was hung..Oh my, she thought, I have to taste him. She begin to unbuckle his belt.. No response. Sean just kept his eyes on the road.. She unzipped his pants to find a rock hard dick staring at her. It was so hard that it pushed its way out of his boxers. WOW.. she thought.. Sydney had to have his dick. She leaned over to get a better look, THIS BROTHA WAS HUNG!!! He had to have been all of 12 inches and then some.. She begin to slowly lick the tip of his dick, letting the spit flow down the sides of his shaft getting it ready for the ride she was about to take him on. She slowly put the head in her mouth and began jacking his dick while she sucked on his helmet. Sean started to moan softly. "Yes", Sydney thought "I still got it".. She then began to get into it. She spat on his shaft and went to work.. He started to moan a little louder.. She looked up and saw his eyes rolling in the back of his head.. "Wow baby you have to keep your eyes on the road" She said as he regained composure. She began to get back to work.. taking both of his balls in her mouth going back and forth between the two.. he loved it. she worked her way back to the tip by licking all the way back to the top before deep throating him. See the thing about Sydney is she has no gag reflex so that 12 inches and then some was all the way to the back of her throat.. He began to fuck her in her mouth, and his body began to shake. She felt the warm liquid going down her throat.. Yummy she thought. I have to have the rest of him. She went back in this time taking him all in from the jump, they were almost home she couldn't wait... Oh the things she would do to him...

 
Comments
MzKeepItReal,
I'm the author so feed back both good and bad are welcome.. let me know if i should keep writing or not!
2008-12-03 20:02:00
maxwell,
So far so good.. Keep writing
2008-12-03 20:22:34
2Konfident,
Sounds good......
2008-12-03 20:40:23
Quit while you ahead,
No substance...just sex. Just like all the other sex stories on the site, nothing original, nothing intriguing. Predictable and boring. Think outside the box. Everybody wanna be a ZANE...
2008-12-03 21:55:26
MzKeepItReal,
oh i forgot to mention that this is a snippet from the the first part.. lol.. @quit while you ahead.. thx.. i'll take that into consideration..
2008-12-03 22:13:12
MzKeepItReal,
The entire first part will be posted by the morning.. just testing the waters..
2008-12-03 22:14:17
iQon,
Really good, it actually held my attention. I'm sho his ass don't know what to do with all 12 of those inches...lol! I do, though, I know how to work my 12-inches deep in some warm wet pussy....lol!

iQon!
2008-12-03 23:02:51
MzKeepItReal,
lol @ iQon.. I bet..
2008-12-03 23:23:48
Ghost Writer,
Kinda agree with quit while your ahead..but I'm not jumping to conclusion til I read the rest..Keep it up just dont fall into the category of everyone else having every chapter include sex..although this did arouse me a little LOL!!

did that just sound contradictive? (if thats a word)
2008-12-04 10:00:48
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