CAN SOMEBODY PLEASE.....

THAT BITCH CLIT!! HER STORY WASN'T EVEN ALL THAT!! NOW HER FIRST STORY WAS DA BUSINESS BUT THIS RECENT ONE, NOT SO MUCH!

2009-10-12 07:24:12

hey Gabby she is still around she posted somethin last week (a comment) she said she is spending her free time like all of us....reading ripped n ready.....I miss ur writing and I miss hers as well!!!!

2009-10-12 09:00:56

Hey, Bunny, your support along with several others keeps all writers inspired. My girl, Teena Marie recited a famous quote: Art is long, and life is short. Writing is a true, artistic, labor of love. I'll be back at later this afternoon. God bless all the writers and readers on this site.

2009-10-12 09:10:56

POSITIVE FIRST:

MR. FREIGHTMAN, I AM LOVING YOUR STORY. I HAD TO CATCH UP TO EVERYONE ELSE, BUT IT WAS A GREAT READ..KEEP IT COMING.

THANKS BUNNY FOR THE INFO...I HAD FORGOTTEN ABOUT THAT!

NOW FOR THAT NO TALENTED HATER THAT POSTED THAT FIRST COMMENT. OBVIOUSLY YOU DON'T KNOW ME I CAN'T STAND HATERS....IF YOU CAN DO BETTER PLEASE SHOW AND PROVE. STOP BACK BITING IN THE BACKGROUND. YOU JUST MAD CAUSE SHE GETS SHINE ON HERE. THIS SITE IS ABOUT SUPPORTING EACH OTHER IF YOU CANT DO THAT. FIND ANOTHER SITE.

BTW: YOU SHOULD KNOW I STAY ON A BITCH CLIT, IT'S ONE OF MY FAVORITE THINGS TO DO. MAYBE YOU NEED SOMEONE ON YOURS...CALL ME

2009-10-12 09:41:53

thats hilarious I was one of the first people to write on this site and my story excuse me book is published...so come again... secondly...what people MUST realize is that everyone is NOT going to like YOUR Shit or the next person for that matter...thirdly...you need to learn to take your ass some where else, in this business and I mean REAL WRITING BUSINESS the critics will ripe you apart before your final draft is even considered so get tough skin or get off my shit!! Maybe you need some dick, thats ur problem.

2009-10-12 09:47:19

yall petty ass shit on this site, you ever look at the number of people who visit this site? ITS NOT ALOT BOO so you might want to fall back, this site doesn't even get 500 ppl a day hell or week so eveyrbody who writes on here gets shine....think that one over. I agree with the first post, this second story she wrote isn't all that, its boring, has no story line and 4 damn characters.

2009-10-12 09:50:08

REALLY!! YOU ARE PUBLISHED, YET STILL FIND TIME OUTSIDE OF BOOK SIGNINGS TO COME BACK HERE? WHAT'S THE NAME OF YOUR BOOK? MAYBE I CAN CHECK IT OUT. I GOT A WOBBLY TABLE IN MY GAME ROOM, AND NEED SOMETHING TO HOLD IT UP WITH. WHAT NUMBER IS IT ON THE BEST SELLER'S LIST? YOU ARE RIGHT THE REAL WRITING BUSINESS IS CUT THROAT, BUT YOU FAIL TO REALIZE THIS IS NOT THE REAL WRITING BUSINESS. HERE WE OFFER CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM.

ON TO THE NEXT HATER:

WHETHER THIS SITE HAS 5 MILLION OR 5 PEOPLE LOG IN EVERY DAY, YOU ARE ONE OF THEM...SO UNLESS YOU CAN DO BETTER, SHUT THE FUCK UP(BERNIE MAC VOICE) IT'S REALLY NOT THAT SERIOUS.

2009-10-12 14:38:50

idk why ppl try to tear each other down on here....I mean if u dont like some1's work just dont read it....do u have to be so hateful???? WTF! And yes I am on MSBOOBUTTER and GABBY TERRY's clit, ass, tits, n all!!!!!!!!!!!! I give them the credit I feel they deserve!!! Ladies please keep givin me GREAT STORIES!!!

2009-10-12 15:20:08

hey Gabby---->LMAO ROTFL @ using that book for ur wobbly table!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2009-10-12 15:21:39

LMAO -- Gabrielle I'm a rolling with this one. You and Bunny just made my day ..... and that wobbly table OMG!!!! I'm on my knees, praising you for that one.....

2009-10-12 16:36:13

LOL! Gabby...Bunny...you two are priceless. I've said it before and I'll say it again. Everything ain't for everybody. If someone doesn't like what I write then I just write it off as not being for them. I'll keep it moving shortly.

2009-10-12 18:57:51

YOU ALL KNOW I USUALLY TRY YO BE POSITIVE, BUT THEY TOOK ME THERE. THE HATERS MADE ME DO IT. I LOVE THIS SITE AS WELL AS ALL THE OTHERS..IT GIVES ME A PLACE TO GO TO RATHER THAN DEAL WITH WHAT'S HAPPENING NOW.

TO BUNNY: "yes I am on MSBOOBUTTER and GABBY TERRY's clit, ass, tits, n all!!!!!!!!!!!!" GIRL YOU BETTER STOP...IF EVER YOU VISIT HOUSTON, DROP ME A LINE. YOU READ MY STORIES, I WILL HAVE YOU SEEING STARS....

2009-10-12 19:28:11

MY BOOK IS CALLED "THE EX-FACTOR" CHECK IT OUT...THATS ONLY ONE OF THEM BUT I FIGURE YOU WOULD BE ABLE TO FOLLOW THAT ONE BECAUSE ITS ON UR LEVEL...CHECK IT OUT THEN CHECK OUT THE BEST SELLER LIST, AND I'M DONE BOOK SIGNING FOR THIS BOOK AND WORKING ON MY NEXT AND I ONLY COME ON THIS DAMN SITE TO SEE IF I CAN SPOT SOME TALENT SINCE I'M MOVING TO THE OTHER SIDE OF THINGS AND FIGURE I CAN MAKE SOMEONE ELSE SOME MONEY!! WHO GIVES A FUCK ABOUT UR TABLE, I'VE ALREADY OBTAINED SUCCESS FROM MY BOOKS. ALL YALL DO ON HERE IS HOPE ON THE FIRST THING SMOKING. THE MAN STARTED WRITING RIPPED AND READY AND U STOPPED UR WEAK ASS TORY CAUSE U KNEW U DIDN'T HAVE NO WINS SO YOU TOOK THE L AND STOPPED THE MADNESS. NOW IF U NEED SOME HELP WITH THAT TRASH THEN I CAN HELP YOU AND LIKE I SAID IT LACKS A LOT OF THINGS THAT I'M POINTING OUT TO YOU CAUSE IF U TOOK THAT TO A PUBLISHER RIGHT NOW, THEY'D LAUGH YOU OUT THE DAMN OFFICE AND RIP YOU APART. YOU'D ONLY HAVE 2 PAGES AND A BRUSED EGO WHEN YOU LEAVE. TRUST

2009-10-13 07:09:13

me, I know what I'm talking about. People come in my office daily and after the staff has tore them down they all say the same thing, they wish someone would of been telling them the truth from jump instead of just hopping on their bandwagon. So why don't you take the CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM and keep it moving. Its called TOUGH LOVE!! I DON'T CARE IF U USE THE BOOK FOR UR TABLE, BOO CAUSE YOU BOUGHT IT! HAHAHA HAVE A BLESSED DAY!

2009-10-13 07:15:54

address, I'll send you an autographed copy of my next book, out in November....Millionaires Wives Club...I'm sure you read one of my books (Flip Side of The Game, Game Over) or a book that I was featured in (too many to name). Don't come at me sideways when I'm just stating my opinion that I an totally entitled to...I was on Essence bestseller list for all books and won awards so when you get on my level, HOLLA @ YA GIRL!!!

2009-10-13 08:59:54

you obviously are made cause she told you off. i searched the book ex-factor, and there are dozens of them by that name which one are you. and all of them are under $10. i gotta give it to my girl Gabby, and MsBoobutter. I'll buy your book too. the least i can do is bring your number of sales to at least 7. good luck with that.

2009-10-13 09:00:17

LMAO...WOW YOU ARE TAKING THIS WAY TOO SERIOUSLY SWEETHEART. IF YOU DON'T LIKE ANYONE'S STORY DON'T READ IT. NO ONE IS STUDYING YOU...ITS REALLY EASY TO SAY YOU WROTE A BOOK, AND WHAT NOT, WHEN NO ONE HERE KNOWS YOU. HECK IN REALITY I'M ERIC JEROME DICKEY!! SURPRISE!!

TO THE PERSON ABOVE I SEARCHED THAT TITLE ON AMAZON AND THE ONES ARE SAW WERE 62CENTS. YOU KNOW WHAT I'LL BUY THAT ONE. I FIGURE ITS A BARGAIN. ANYTHING TO SUPPORT THE DELUSIONAL PEOPLE OUT THERE.

2009-10-13 09:09:43

LOL @ Gabby being Eric Jerome Dickey!! OMG that made my morning...thanks 4 the laugh Gabby. Have a great day ppl!!

2009-10-13 09:15:09

Good morning! Everyone, it's a good day to be inside for writing. God bless you and have a wonderful day. Gabrielle -- I don't ever want to be on your bad side (wink).

2009-10-13 09:44:21

LOL... I DON'T HAVE A BAD SIDE. I FEEL, IF YOU HAVE BEEN PUBLISHED AND YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT WAS FOR YOU, WHY WOULD YOU TURN AROUND AND BE SO HATEFUL. WHAT WAS THE NEED TO CALL ANYONE A BITCH? AS A SO-CALLED WRITER, YOU COULD NOT FIND A MORE EDUCATED WAY TO MAKE YOUR POINT? SERIOUSLY! I HAVE READ MANY STORIES ON HERE THAT I DID NOT CARE FOR. BUT I KEPT MY OPINION TO MY SELF. WRITER OR NOT, PUBLISHED OR NOT, THERE IS NO NEED TO TEAR SOMEONE ELSE DOWN.

NOW MR. FREIGHTMAN..YOU ARE ALMOST ON MY "NONEXISTENT" BAD SIDE AND YOU KNOW WHY..I'M SURE EVEN MS. I AM PUBLISHED WOULD AGREE YOUR STORY IS VERY GOOD. SO COME WITH IT. I'M WAITING.

2009-10-13 10:01:22

thats what your not getting, I'm not trying to be hateful or tear any one down, my opinion is my opinion and I SAID I LIKED UR FIRST story very much, I just don't like the second one and thats my opinion. I read on here that you were self publishing or else I would of stepped to you about it. The Ex Factor came out in 07 ofcourse you can get it for 9.99 now! Duh! and btw my name is TuShonda Whitaker, maybe that'll help with your search. But like I said I've obtained my success and my next book comes out in November, pick it up or don't. Believe me it won't hurt my pockets. And all books I've written have been on Essence Best Seller List.

2009-10-13 11:06:57

Whoa! What the hell happened in here? It started out as an APB on BooButter and turned into a internet fight! LOL! You see BooButter what you done caused? Post a chapter to calm everyone down! LMAO!

2009-10-13 11:14:58

to end this back and forth...i agree with gabby you seem to be very negative, maybe since you are so "successful" now, you forgot how rough the struggle was for you to get to where you are. there was no need for your language, you could have been critical without all the bitch this, and bitch that. most of the people on hear are on here as a hobby for fun all 500 as your sidekick said. only a handful are looking to be published. i guess since you made it through the door, you will shut it behind you so no one else gets through. you can state your opinion, without calling anyone out their name. and i think you are a little confused..gabby did not have a first story msboobutter did.
btw: essence best seller list is only for a particular audience. its nothing to brag about since they get there numbers from maybe 11 bookstores nationwide. come back when you've made it to the NY Times best sellers list.
you can claim to be whomever you want to be. I never heard of you.

2009-10-13 11:24:50

IT WAS NEW YORK BEST SELLER AS WELL, LOOK IT UP HONEY AND IF YOU READ WHAT I WROTE I SAID I WAS ON HERE LOOKING FOR TALENT, YOU MIGHT WANT TO TAKE YOURSELF ELSE WHERE CAUSE U ARE ALL WRONG. AND I KNOW WHO IM TALKING TO AND SO DOES SHE, YOU DON'T HAVE TO HAVE HEARD ABOUT ME, I HEARD ABOUT ME AND MY READERS HEARD ABOUT ME AND THATS ALL THA MATTERS TO ME AND THERE WAS NO BITCH THIS OR THAT, I USED THE WORD BITCH ONE TIME AND IF YOU TOOK IT THE WRONG WAY THEN SO BE IT, IT WASN'T MEANT FOR YOU OR ANYONE FOR THAT MATTER. IT'S JUST TALK. I DON'T KNOW YALL AND YALL DON'T KNOW ME SO GET UR FEELINGS OUT OF THIS. THANK YOU AND HAVE A GOOD DAY, I'M DONE WITH THIS YOUNG HIGHSCHOOL CRAP YALL HAVE A GOOD DAY.

2009-10-13 11:45:32

I was talking to boobutter not gabby or whomever I said I liked her first story and she's writing a second one so obviously i'm talking about her story. Please keep your nose out of grown folks business.

2009-10-13 11:47:26

were talking to gabby not once did msboobutter address you. you used the word your story when replying to Gabby. and you actually used the word bitch twice. you obviously have nothing to do since you are on her waiting to respond to her comments. Gabby don't even bother with this chick. she hyped up cause her book is only read by the chicks who get food stamps and stay home all day to watch BET. for someone who is done with highschool crap you sure had a flashback. you posted on here 9 times.

2009-10-13 13:12:38

WOW! COURIOUS GIRL, I DON'T KNOW HOW THINGS GOT THIS FAR...LMAO.
OK, OK, I DID IT...LMAO

MR. RIPPED AND READY POSTED A NEW CHAPTER, I'M GONNA GO READ IT NOW..

BY THE WAY EVERYONE I'M HAVING A BOY, FOUND OUT TODAY.

2009-10-13 13:22:07

OMG! that is wonderful, Gabrielle. 10 fingers, 10 toes..... My congratulations to you and your mate for a healthy pregnancy ....

2009-10-13 14:00:43

THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!
I MET MY HUSBAND AT THE THERAPIST OFFICE AND HE WAS PUTTING UP A FIGHT WITH THE THERAPIST, AND WOULD NOT WALK ACROSS THE ROOM. I SWEAR THE MOMENT I SAID WE WERE HAVING A BOY. HE DAMN NEAR DID A CARTWHEEL....LOL

2009-10-13 14:08:51

IM PRETTY SURE I HAVE READ THE EX FACTOR AND PERSONALLY ITS NOT ALL THAT GREAT WHAT PEOPLE FAIL TO REALIZE IS THAT WE COME HERE TO GET SOMETHING DIFFERNT BECAUSE ALL OF THE BOOKS OUT RIGHT NOW ARE STARTING TO SOUND ALIKE AND THATS CRAP. SO DONT HATE ON MRS BOOBUTTER OR MRS TERRY OR MR FREIGHTMAN BECAUSE THIS SITE IS ALL ABOUT LOVE HATERS ARENT ALLOWED
PEACE AND LOVE TO ALL STORYALLEY READERS AND WRITERS

2009-10-13 14:40:27

Ok ,so haters aside What IS up with ms. boobutter. I have been waiting for the another hit of your Literary crack we are all way over due for a fix. I think we should Not give any more attention to all the haters , if your game was as tight as you say it is you would not feel the need to kick dirt on someone else who is just working hard to bring there art life. Secure people congratulate and appreciate they don't hate. BTW Gabrielle Terry How wonderful a little baby boy on the way good for you!

2009-10-13 18:25:42

^^^ I COULD NOT HAVE SAID IT BETTER.

HONEY CHILE THIS PREGNANCY WILL BE THE END OF ME. WHY CAN'T WOMEN BE PREGNANT FOR 5 MONTHS AND THEN CALL IT QUITS. I AM READY NOW!!!! SERIOUSLY!! THANK YOU FOR THE WELL WISHES.

2009-10-13 19:41:08

LOL! Are you serious? I was trying to stay out of this but...I didn't know this was a competition. Someone please explain to me how I took an "L" on a literary site and who's keeping score? I had stopped posting before Ripped and Ready was even added.

Why am I being addressed when I'm not even in the conversation? When I have something to say, I sign in so that there's no confusion as to who said what. Gabby and some others were giving the haters the business...not me and on that note...a big thanks to Gabby, as well as, the other supporters. If you don't like my second story, I respect that. I can't name one author that I can say that I enjoyed every single one of their works, so I understand that.

Lastly, when it comes to writing and being published...I'd love to be published BUT I love writing so much that even if I'm never published I will do it til I die. Hell, I'm writing here for free, lol. I love it that much. New post coming soon!

2009-10-14 07:33:50

CHILE I DON'T KNOW WHAT HAPPENED. MY APB WAS SUPPOSED TO FUNNY, IT WAS ONLY FOR THOSE PEOPLE LIKE MYSELF WHO ENJOY YOUR STORIES. IT WAS NOT FOR "HATERS", AND VERY IMPORTANT "AUTHORS" TO BITCH ABOUT. I HAD TO LET IT GO. I FELT THE BROOKLYN ABOUT TO COME OUT OF ME..

2009-10-14 09:05:14

okay msboobutter its offical and in writing..."NEW POST COMING"...got damnit i need that post babe!!! Gimme gimme gimme!!! LOL

2009-10-14 10:10:10