You never know what will happen

Now I am new to this and I find this story I starting writing a while back. I just want to share it with the peeps on here. I was following Ripped and Ready but then I went on deployment. I am back now and I want to share my story with ya'll if ya'll don't mind. If it's not good then just let me know no love lost.

It's a beatiful thing being in love with some one or so I thought. My story starts a few years ago when I met this guy named Marc. He was everything a good man in my mind was suppose to be. He was about 5'10 180 solid muscle goregous face, beautiful carmel skin, and the biggest dick I have ever seen. By the way I'm Sam I am 5'5 150 lbs carmel skin pretty face cute body just an average chick. Anywho Marc and I were introduced through a friend. Lola is my girl she down for whatever a true friend. Took a bullet for me once. Now if someone does that you know that you must keep them around. Back to the subject. "Hey Sam I want you to meet someone. This is Marc he's here on leave.(We live in Brooklyn by the way) He's in the Marine Corps." "Oh well you know me I love a man in uniform. Hi Marc I'm Sam." "Well hello there Ms. Sam it's always nice to meet such a fine looking woman such as yourself." Instancety I thought in my head I am taking you home with me tonight. I don't know bout anyone else but I am a true believer in love at first sight and the way Marc was looking I was most dep in love. Marc had just returned from a deployment and he was looking like he ain't see a female in years. We all starting rapping talking bout how it's like around the block and how nothing has changed. He kept looking at me as if was the most beautiful thing he has every seen. Finally he spoke, "Ms. Sam I will be here for a few day would you like to be my entertainment while I am a here?" "Really I would love that." Trying not to sign to girlish. Now Marc was the complete opposite of me. I had just moved to New York a few years back I orginally hail from TEXAS. Marc was a good ol' Jersey boy. A few more hours went back and we still talking bout dumb stuff. Marc looks at me and says, "You want to get out of here?" "Sure I don't have any thing else better to do." Marc didn't need to know what I was in New York for nor did anyone else. Before we left I had to make a call. I stepped away for a while, the voice on the other end let me know exactly what was up. "I will be there at 2 a.m. tell her she better have my stuff or else." I turned around and Marc was staring at me asking what that was all about. Nothing I said it is of no concern you want to get out of here right? We go around the corner and I hit the unlock button to the whip. A BMW 745 li. Only the best for someone of my status. It's all black with limo tint on 22 inch chromed out rim stick shift cause ahh Imma pro with the stick. HaHa We ride for a few blocks then I turn into a dark alley. I stop the car and ask some questions. "What are your plans for the rest of the evening? I got things to do and I don't have time to be wasting." "Damn little mama what you getting into that is going to take you away from her. What can you possibly be doing that is that important?" Now I hate when people get all nosey and get into my business. I have things to do and with my rep around this place I don't have time to get rap up into Marc but he's body and he's eyes were calling me. I have to get away but something bout him was making me stay..

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