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CONTROL: The Beginning

First story, I know its a long read but just give honest feedback...A dude here just dont like to go in for the Kill yo....every story has a beginning a middle and a end...this the beginning ya fell.....Enjoy

 

Just another typical day at work.  Like always, there is a steady flow of customers throughout the day and im keeping busy by mechandising and providing customer service.  Now I myself, i'm 5'10, redboned, hair always faded, nice toned body, and facial hair always trimmed and taped.  I consider myself appealing to the eyes, yo boi here do aight.  Like I always do, I walk the store making sure everything is done and all customers are being taking care of when I hear "Hey Mah Dude! Yo Sir, do you work here?"  I turn around and start to say "Yes Sir, I do" but  get stopped in mid sentence because standing in front of me is this, well for lack of a better term, FINE ASS darkskinned brotha standing in front of me.  Now dis dude you can tell is always fresh.  Ole boi had these lips that were so muthafuckin plump that you couldnt help but wonder how they tasted...this dudes arms was so toned you couldnt help but imagine yoself wrapped in them, in more than one way...and he had on this tight v-neck tee with these bad ass TRUE RELIGIONS on that showed the physique of his body just right...This dude was a FUCKIN GOD to say the least....So as i'm finally about to speak he says "Yeah Mah Dude You Can Help me" with this lil sexy ass smile on his face.

At that point I could feel myself smiling and a dude is redboned so I know a nigga was all pink and red in the face...I responded with "Aight man so wat can I do for you?"  He responds with "Well Mah dude let me start off by saying my name is Traevon and i cum in here alot and im always checkin you out.."  His words kinda catch me off guard but this nigga was so damn fine and  ya boi here talk alot of shyt so I say "Hey mah dude thanks fo da compliment and all dat yo but how you know i get down like dat man?"

Traevon: Man now you know I know you get down first off becuase you still standing here entertaining this mad gay shyt that im shootin at you yo...Second off you all pink and shyt and it aint because you red either yo....he says with a chuckle and a smile

Me: Aight man you seem to have a whole lot of confidence mah dude and you talkin a whole lot of shyt but even if i did get down wats sup?

Traevon: Begins to move in closer and says, "See wats sup is when you get off yo...you gonna meet me out front and you gon let me take you to dis mexican joint where we gon have a couple of margaritas and den yo...you gon let me take you to dis movie right...where we gon chill....after that its back to my place to get to know each other better than this lil convo we havin right now ya feel me.

Me: I start to laugh but my face only lets me smile as im saying: Man I like how you just gon come in here, in a nigga's work place at dat, and tell me what ima let you do...but since you all confident and shyt ima agree to dis yo and see what you about..cuz im feelin yo approach and swagg.......

Traevon: Looks me up and down with that same sexy ass smile, licks his lips and says, See now that's what sup yo....I like dat...So when you getting off mah dude so I can know when to be ready by yo.,

Me: I get off at 5 man... but ima need to go to da crib and get right yo....cant be doin this thang in the work uniform ya know while you all fresh and shyt...

Traevon: Aight my dude...well let me see your phone yo...

Me: My phone wat da hell..

Traevon: Nigga just let me see da phone yo

Me: Right now im really hesitant but i take out my phone and says, "Aight man here,,,,,shyt just dont fuck wit it yo, wouldnt have to lose my job fo kickin a customers ass even if you fine as hell"

Traevon: Nigga wateva I aint entertainin dat bullshyt you talking bout im just puttin my number in yo phone so i can call myself from it .....that way ill have yo number and you will have mine ya feel....

Me: Aight nigga do yo thang then man...

Traevon hands me the phone and says, "Aight man you gon hit me up at 5 and after you done got fresh so you can give me directions to come pic you up yo" and begins to walk away.

Me: Hey yo Trae, you dont even know mah name" i yell out as i remember i didnt give it to him earlier

Traevon looks back and says "man you got a nametag yo, I Know your name.." smiles and walks off...

All damn day long i cant get this nigga off mah brain and im anticipatin 5pm all the while thinkin this nigga got some balls approaching a bruh like he did....but damn that shyt was hot...A nigga was thinkin so much dat he didnt realize it was 4:55 so i turned in mah keys and ran to the time clock...as im clockin out i pull out mah phone to call dis nigga and let him know im punchin the clock when  i see ive recieved a text from TRAE saying "HEY YO MAH DUDE, I HOPE YOU READY TO BE CONTROLLED! :)"

 

 
Comments
Datboi J.,
I Want to see where this is going
2011-04-13 14:11:22
?????,
aiight yo! You are realing me in!!!!!!
2011-04-15 06:26:54
DatBD College Kid,
Damn this shit seem so real...i like it..where da next part
2011-04-15 08:58:33
GABRIELLE TERRY,
I like it....
2011-05-17 12:39:13
this aint right,
IM INN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2011-06-06 06:17:29
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