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RIPPED & READY (PART 64)

RIPPED & READY (PART LXIV) 

 

 Calling all cars…Calling all cars…a gangster thug is trying to steal my heart.

Before exiting the room, I straightened out my cloths, and steadied myself on two of the walls by holding both arms out and planting my palms on them.  If Peewee could lay it on this thick with cloths on, I could just imagine how well he'd knock my boots with them off. 

Uh, huh “butts-booty-nakedis”

Then I'd be asking him, where my socks were. 

Then he'd say...

“I just knocked those motherfuckas off Brutha Marco”.

I could just hear him saying it in that deep commanding voice.

 I know “got-dayum” well he’d probably have me looking for my damn socks, but as exhilarating as that little tryst sounded, I had to get focused because that nigga was Trouble with a capital “T”. 

I knew brothers like him could be very possessive and jealous – and I cannot even fathom getting involved with somebody who sold drugs.  We’re talking about guns and violence and murders oh my!  Plus, I’m sure there would be a string of haters that stretched for miles –women and (now) men.

His appearance and lifestyle attracted all types of “wrong” people, and there was no way I was about to get wrapped up in somebody that had a body but might have me ending up as a dead body. 

Furthermore, that electric green Lexus would always be a constant reminder of Albertine’s murder.  Collin would never forgive me for getting involved with someone who was, most likely, involved with people who were responsible for his mother’s death. 

Then there’s the fact that he had been banging my step-sister, Denise, that added another reason to the list of reasons why I needed to keep my distance from Peewee.  He may be able to hit it like Barry Bonds of the SF Giants, but I needed it caressed like a Luther Vandross tenor moment.  He may have had the hardware to lock it up tight and show me right, but he also had an America’s Most Wanted leave it alone swang that I could not…

Must not…

Had better not…

Climb on top of…

Get on board with…

Hop up and down on…

Okay, you get the picture…

Dick or no dick…

Swag or no swag…

Sex appeal so real.. 

Hot rod of steel...

Brutha Marco leave trouble alone…

Or you might get that ass spanked in more ways than one.

Now, I might cause ya’ll to gag on this one but, day-um, why did all the packers possess all the qualities of a slacker…

I mean, sure they can give you nice material things…

For a minute… (until they get caught by Johnny Law).

They damn sure can …

Hit it hard the way you like it…

For a minute…

Make you feel like a million bucks…

For a minute…

Rock the fuck out of your world …

For a minute, but when it’s all said and done all you have is an unpredictable lease that might expire at any moment. 

I was glad my work day was over and dreaded making the trip over to my moms, but it was something that needed to be done.  I figured that the situation there hadn’t escalated because I hadn’t heard from my sister.  I truly hoped that Polly-Ester Papa had vacated the premises because I was not in the mood to listen to drunken rhetoric from a prehistoric pimp. 

I hopped in my Jetta and headed up University towards my moms. 

When the vibration of my cell phone hit the bone of my waist, I grabbed it, looked down and expected it to read M6 since Collin’s health was improving, however, it read…

“He’s Fired…”

Fuck, why can’t he just leave me alone?

 

 
Comments
g. d. freightman,
Gabby, you had better be listening to the doctor.... Don't make me hunt you down, lol. The other members of our online family have been keeping their foot in my behind ..... LOl
2009-11-03 18:30:50
this aint right,
FREIGHTMAN! YOU HITTING OUR LITERARY G SPOTS AND MAKING US GUSH!!! BRO! YOU HAVE TOTALLY TAKEN US BY SURPRISE JUST WHEN YOU THINK YOU HAVE THE ROLLER COASTER FIGURED OUT LEAVE IT TO YOU TO SNATCH US TO THE LEFT AND HAVE OUR GUT UP IN OUR THROATS HAHAHAHAHAH! I SO LOVE IT AND IF IT HURTS THEN IT HURST SO GOOD!!!

HELLO EVERYBODY MY NAME IS "THIS AINT RIGHT" AND IM AN ADDICT!

MS GABBY I A HAVE NEVER FORMERLY BEEN INTRODUCED BUT I NEED YOUR HEALTH TO GET BACK TO ITS BEST AS YOU LEFT US ALL HANGIN ON "CUM&PLAY" YOU NEED TO BE PUT IN TIME OUT FOR THAT!!!!!!!! NOW GET US TOGETHER MA SO I CAN HAVE SOME SORT OF DISTRACTION FROM THIS TWISTED RELATIONSHIP I HAVE DEVELOPED WITH FREIGHTMAN! ITS CRQZY AND I KEEP COMING BACK FOR MORE! HAHAHAHAHA
2009-11-04 07:17:03
Bunny,
lemme find out peewee got a jones in his bones for marco LOL great read as always and thank you as always....just in case i havent told u lately mr freightman i LOVE this story!!!
2009-11-04 07:49:09
Bunny,
MS GABBY TERRY...

I hope you and the baby are well...follow ur docs orders!!! stay in bed!!! I was on bed rest the last month of my pregnancy so I know how u feel...kinda like a prisioner huh??? LOL Keeping u in my thoughts and prayers...KISSES!!!
2009-11-04 08:05:57
GABRIELLE TERRY,
WELL OBVIOUSLY WE AINT GOT OUR FEET FAR UP YOUR BUT ENOUGH. WHAT ASTOUNDS ME IS YOU BOLD FACE AUDACITY TO JUST POST 1 CHAPTER WHEN EVER YOU FEEL LIKE IT NOW. SERIOUSLY! IT'S CLEAR TO ME THAT YOU DON'T CARE ABOUT YOUR LIFE, IF YOU DID YOU WOULD KNOW THAT YOU DON'T MESS WITH PREGNANT WOMEN. I CAN HURT YOU AND BLAME IT ON HORMONES...LOL

THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR THE CONCERN, BUT THIS BED REST SHIT IS GETTING ON MY NERVES. PLUS I'M STILL TRYING TO DEAL WITH MY FAMILY AND THE LOSS OF MY BROTHER. I WILL SAY THAT COMING ON HERE AND GETTING ALL THE LOVE MAKES ME FEEL A LOT BETTER.
NOW AS FAR AS "CUM & PLAY" I WILL TRY TO FINISH THAT. BUT REALLY CAN ANYONE REALLY POST ANY STORIES RIGHT OTHER THAN BOOBUTTER AND G.D THEY GOT THE GAME ON LOCK.....

SMOOCHES...G.D. YOU KNOW I'M LOVING YOU RIGHT NOW.
2009-11-04 08:43:01
GABRIELLE TERRY,
WELL OBVIOUSLY WE AINT GOT OUR FEET FAR UP YOUR BUT ENOUGH. WHAT ASTOUNDS ME IS YOU BOLD FACE AUDACITY TO JUST POST 1 CHAPTER WHEN EVER YOU FEEL LIKE IT NOW. SERIOUSLY! IT'S CLEAR TO ME THAT YOU DON'T CARE ABOUT YOUR LIFE, IF YOU DID YOU WOULD KNOW THAT YOU DON'T MESS WITH PREGNANT WOMEN. I CAN HURT YOU AND BLAME IT ON HORMONES...LOL

THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR THE CONCERN, BUT THIS BED REST SHIT IS GETTING ON MY NERVES. PLUS I'M STILL TRYING TO DEAL WITH MY FAMILY AND THE LOSS OF MY BROTHER. I WILL SAY THAT COMING ON HERE AND GETTING ALL THE LOVE MAKES ME FEEL A LOT BETTER.
NOW AS FAR AS "CUM & PLAY" I WILL TRY TO FINISH THAT. BUT REALLY CAN ANYONE REALLY POST ANY STORIES RIGHT OTHER THAN BOOBUTTER AND G.D THEY GOT THE GAME ON LOCK.....

SMOOCHES...G.D. YOU KNOW I'M LOVING YOU RIGHT NOW.
2009-11-04 08:43:03
GABRIELLE TERRY,
WHY DID THAT POST TWICE? THAT'S WHAT BED REST DOES TO YOU. IT MAKES YOU DO THE SAME THING TWICE. THEY WERE NOT LYING ABOUT PREGNANT MEMORY...LOL
2009-11-04 08:45:19
Bmorelove,
OKAY I HAVE BEEN OUT FOR A FEW DAYS FOR PT.1 VACA BUT NOW THAT I HAVE BEEN UP TO SPEED....I HOPE MARCO BE VERY CAREFUL

DRUG DEALERS AINT NOTHING TO PLAY WITH (PERSONAL EXPERIENCE)

GABBY I AM GLAD TO SEE YOUR COMMENT AND THAT YOU ARE DOING BETTER...WE SURE DID MISS YA

BUNNY ---> HOW U DOIN' LOL

HEY WASUP 'THIS AINT RIGHT' YOU KNOW I LOVE YOUR COMMENTS TOO

NOW STOP MAKING US WAIT G.D. GIVE US ANOTHER HIT....IM SCRATCHING LIKE CRAZY OVER HERE LOL
2009-11-04 09:38:11
James Marks,
another great set of chapters sir.. def want to know whats going to happen with Joe-Joe now that peewee is in the mix.

and yes Gabby is right you better do as she say cause she would get away with it, hormones is the best defense ever (lol)....

deuces.....
2009-11-04 09:50:23
this aint right,
i think its something how this story is bringing people together and aiding the concern for others! you dont see this kinda love on the news/media! freightman your doing more then you know, and if you had the good sense the lord gave you you would be posting another "COUPLE" of chapters to shut us up and keep us loving on one another you know feins get outta pocket when they get to scrathi'n (shout out ot Bmorelove) lol!

I been to bmore once and everything was way to nice looking and enticing i ran up ouuta there and never came back! you make somebody want to visit though !
2009-11-04 09:52:41
Lala,
Please keep the post coming...it makes my otherwise boring day of doing payroll exciting.....Love Ya
2009-11-04 14:24:57
Bunny,
@ BMORELOVE.....
I thought u fell off the map LMAO

@ THIS AINT RIGHT
Thats a very true statement u made about bring ppl together

**I LUV MY STORYALLEY FAMILY!!!!....Yall make me smile Kisses for....
GABBY MSBOOBUTTER
THIS AINT RIGHT
JAMES MARKS
BMORELOVE
and of course the 1 and only.....
G.D. FREIGHTMAN
2009-11-04 14:47:09
Bunny,
1 QUESTION MR FREIGHTMAN....DO OUR (ME, GABBY, THIS AINT RIGHT) THREATS NOT SCARE U??? CAUSE U NEED TO GET ON UR GRIND HONEY AND GIVE THAT SHIT UP!!! U KNOW WAHT WE NEED AND U KNOW WE NEED IT IN MULTIPLE DOSES!!! GIVE IT UP!!! LMAO (but im dead ass serious give up the
"DAY-UM" chapters)
2009-11-04 14:58:10
GABRIELLE TERRY,
I WONDERED THE SAME THING BUNNY...I MEAN HE MUST THINK I'M JOKING OR SOMETHING. I'M DEAD AS SERIOUS G.D. YOU'RE IN CALI RIGHT, WELL I'M IN DALLAS, SO I'M NOT FAR. I CAN GET ON SOUTHWEST AND BE THERE IN A JIFFY.. SO DROP WHATEVER OR WHOMEVER YOU ARE DOING, SIT YOUR BUT IN CHAIR AND GET TO TYPING. IT'S NOW 3PM I WILL CHECK BACK HERE IN A FEW HOURS, AND YOU BETTER HAVE A CHAPTER ON HERE.

NOW MS BOOBUTTER I KNOW YOU READ THIS STORY AND I KNOW YOU READ THE COMMENTS, SO I'M GONNA LET YOU KNOW, I AINT BUT A HOP, SKIP AND A JUMP OFF GETTING ON YOUR ASS ABOUT THE REST OF YOUR STORY..

YA'LL AINT RIGHT!!!!!!
2009-11-04 15:07:08
Bunny,
YES GABBY!!!!

MSBOOBUTTER IS PLAYIN WIT MY EMOTIONS!!!! OOOH GIRL IF U DONT LET US KNOW WHAT IS GOIN ON WITH ROBYN AND RYAN....WELL I WAS TOLD NOT TO THREATEN PPL WHERE AS THEY HAVE PROOF THAT THEY WERE THREATENED...WITH THAT SED....GET ON IT!!!! LOL
2009-11-04 15:12:51
g. d. freightman,
Ya'll are cracking me the hell up. And yes, I dig that part that "this ain't right said" ..... I do dig this Story Alley family... very much.
2009-11-05 02:04:37
this aint right,
THIS IS INDICATIVE OF THE "DEALERS" BEHAVIOR THEY GIVE YOU ALL YOU WANT AT FIRST THEN START STRINGING YOU ALONG AND ONCE THEY SEE WHAT THEY "PUSHING" GOT YOU THEY THEN KNOW THEY GOT YOU AND YOU'LL DO ANYTHING THEY SAY YOU AINT SLICK FREIGHTMAN! IM ON TO YOUR PLAN AND IM NOT BOUT TO BE OWNED BY THE LITERARY HERION YOU PUSHING!!!!! OKAY WHO AM I FOOLING IM AT STREET CORNER STATUS!


WHUT UP B MORELUV!! HOILLA AT ME!!

MS GABBY IM WITCHU LETS GET HIM AND WHOEVER HE ROLLING WIT!

BUNNY GET THE BATMOBILE WARMED UP CAUSE WE BOUT TO DO A DRIVE BY!!!

FREIGHTMAN YOU DON DONE IT NOW IF WE DONE HAVE MULTIPLE HITS TO OUR WRITTEN "G" SPOTS TODAY!!! THE STORY IS GONNA END WITH THE WORDS

"UNFINSIHED WORKS AUTHORS WHEREABOUTS UNKNOWN!"
2009-11-05 06:44:06
g. d. freightman,
"this ain't right" you need to be writing cuz that was funny as hell!!!!!
2009-11-06 13:44:13
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